Trailer of my film | "LOOTMAAR"

[Ali Kamran]

Hey guys,
So wasn't really sure where this thread should be, but I guess this is the place where everyone shares their creativity. Here is mine, a short film made for our video production project. I had 6 members all together who worked on the movie with me. For now I am uploading the trailer here and after the screening on thursday Ill uplaod the whole movie =)

Please do comment on the trailer, your comments will be appreciated.

P.S: This is my first post in this section =P

UPDATE:

Sorry for the delay guys but here you go the final film =). I hope you guys enjoy it.

A Short Film "LOOTMAAR":

 

[HYD3R]

trailer is professional bro keep it up

 

[saadleo]

Nice! professional edit! You might wanna skip the guy holding camera @ 00:18. It kind of ruins the cinematic look. You can either remove it altogther or bring over a still-image of him holding the camera and make sure that the still is photo shopped with an 'emo' or dark environment effect.

Rest of the trailer is nothing but brilliant!

 

[Pleasant]

The Trailer has a Good Production Value the only issue i had with the trailer is it doesnt clear the point like this movie will be on what topic ?
the title is Loot maar and Trailer doesnt convey it properly
the audience cannot get in what sense we are saying Loot maar

 

[saadleo]

^^ Agreed! Very good point!

 

[Hassan]

The word "loot maar" says it all, I guess the movie will be about mobile snatching at gun point, robberies, etc. I mean it would be about things happening in karachi. The trailer looked good. I wouldn't mind watching the whole movie, me likey!

 

[K3yser]

[MENTION=24535]Ali Kamran[/MENTION]: excellent!

Inspired by Tony Scott are we?

 

[BumperJumper]

Is it a biography of Zardari?

 

[Ali Kamran]

trailer is professional bro keep it up

Thank you. Worked very hard on this project =).

Nice! professional edit! You might wanna skip the guy holding camera @ 00:18. It kind of ruins the cinematic look. You can either remove it altogther or bring over a still-image of him holding the camera and make sure that the still is photo shopped with an 'emo' or dark environment effect.

Rest of the trailer is nothing but brilliant!

Thankyou for the appreciation man =). Actually the thing is we made a confusing trailer so the point of the movie is not revealed in the trailer. The guy holding the camera holds a very key role in the film . If we gave a slight hint then our film will be ruined.

The Trailer has a Good Production Value the only issue i had with the trailer is it doesnt clear the point like this movie will be on what topic ?
the title is Loot maar and Trailer doesnt convey it properly
the audience cannot get in what sense we are saying Loot maar

I was waiting for your comment =D . Actually that was the whole point of the trailer. Keep the audience with the suspense of what the movie is actually about. I mean you can keep on guessing and in the end the story will be totally different .

The word "loot maar" says it all, I guess the movie will be about mobile snatching at gun point, robberies, etc. I mean it would be about things happening in karachi. The trailer looked good. I wouldn't mind watching the whole movie, me likey!

Lol!! Hold on to that thought

@Ali Kamran: excellent!

Inspired by Tony Scott are we?

Thanks man. Tony Scott hmmm more like Tarantino =P.

Is it a biography of Zardari?

Hold on to that thought aswell =P

 

[Pleasant]

Well if thats the Case Good Luck so The EDITING Process is completed ?

 

[K3yser]

Thanks man. Tony Scott hmmm more like Tarantino =P.

wel you got QT with that man getting beat on the road part but your cuts scream Man on Fire... anyways nice job man and one more thing you said this was a class project or something... can you point us to some other good movies etc that got made during that process? Im dying to watch some good local productions!

 

[Ali Kamran]

wel you got QT with that man getting beat on the road part but your cuts scream Man on Fire... anyways nice job man and one more thing you said this was a class project or something... can you point us to some other good movies etc that got made during that process? Im dying to watch some good local productions!

Totallly agreed plus Man on Fire was an excellent film. Yes there were about 20 Films produced in class. Ill link them here as soon as everyone uploads them on the internet.

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Well if thats the Case Good Luck so The EDITING Process is completed ?

Yes the movie was screened today and we got a standing round of an applause. Excellent reviews by everyone. I am uploading it at the moment. Will be posting a link in the evening.

 

[HaiderSangi]

Totallly agreed plus Man on Fire was an excellent film. Yes there were about 20 Films produced in class. Ill link them here as soon as everyone uploads them on the internet.

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Yes the movie was screened today and we got a standing round of an applause. Excellent reviews by everyone. I am uploading it at the moment. Will be posting a link in the evening.

dying to see it

 

[shabiramjad]

hey bro awesome ...
i have a site which can help u in more professional creativity ...
just see this website ... http://www.brokenscript.com/?VsmServices

 

[blackviper]

nIcE Bro

 

[Ali Kamran]

dying to see it

Sorry for the delay. Just bought Vimeo Plus to upload it. As soon as the movie is screened in other universities which we have planned Ill upload it =)

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hey bro awesome ...
i have a site which can help u in more professional creativity ...
just see this website ... http://www.brokenscript.com/?VsmServices

Thanks for your concern bro =) But we already working professional and we have our own studio set up.

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nIcE Bro

Thankyou sir =)

 

[Ali Kamran]

Sorry for the delay guys but the first post has been updated with the link to the movie =) .
Had to buy Vimeo Plus so I was arranging for a paypal account.

 

[MegamanEXE]

"SORRY
The creator of this video has not given you permission to embed it on this domain.

This is a Vimeo Plus feature."

So, uh, how do we watch it?

 

[Pseudonym]

https://vimeo.com/55164327
This^ is the link, but the video is set to private.

 

[Ali Kamran]

I am sorry guys video has been privatized till january since we are selected to screen it at LUMS Filums in January so we had to remove it from any public place.