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plz bro correct this sentance as my english is not good

i dunno how i got 94% in gp a level exam

[FONT=&quot]we are setting the same standard the criminal did in the first place.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]This approach will achieve no good, after all, we are setting the same standard as the criminal did in the first place.[/FONT]
 
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^^ another FAIL!

criminal could be criminals depending on the context of the essay
and standard doesnt seem to be right either
 
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bro this essay about captal punishment. so if we kill murder, then we are doing same thing the killer also did
 
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tango said:
bro this essay about captal punishment. so if we kill murder, then we are doing same thing the killer also did
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Which is good right?

He should suffer the same consequences as he made other people suffer. Tit for tat.
 
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tango said:
but is morally inccirrect and barbaric
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And what the murderer did was morally correct? and not barbaric?

No one has the right to take life of anyone.. So even the punishment is barbaric, it IS correct..

I mean common, In Islam if you steal something, The punishment is to cut off their hand. Isnt that barbaric? It is.. but its also just.
 
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[FONT=&quot]we are setting the same standard the criminal did in the first place.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]This approach will achieve no good, after all, we are setting the same standard as the criminal did in the first place.[/FONT]
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[FONT=&quot]we are killing the criminals who killed innocent people in the first place.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]This approach will achieve no good, after all, we are still, killing people.[/FONT]

how this? ^
 
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cheers bro, people like u shud be awarfd 100x in life

---------- Post added at 12:55 AM ---------- Previous post was at 12:50 AM ----------

here is slight refined version

[FONT=&quot]We are murdering the same criminal who murdered an innocent one in the first place. This approach will achieve no good, after all, we are still, murdering people.[/FONT]
 
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tango said:
cheers bro, people like u shud be awarfd 100x in life

---------- Post added at 12:55 AM ---------- Previous post was at 12:50 AM ----------

here is slight refined version

[FONT=&quot]We are murdering the same criminal who murdered an innocent one in the first place. This approach will achieve no good, after all, we are still, murdering people.[/FONT]
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Thanks for your kind comments. :)
 
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tango said:
plz bro correct this sentance as my english is not good

i dunno how i got 94% in gp a level exam

[FONT=&quot]we are setting the same standard the criminal did in the first place.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]This approach will achieve no good, after all, we are setting the same standard as the criminal did in the first place.[/FONT]
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theres no way you even got a B in GP. you dont even know how to spell grammar, and the following sentences are no better. Just a friendly suggestion 'sentance' doesnt mean anything.
 
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DSM1 said:
theres no way you even got a B in GP. you dont even know how to spell grammar, and the following sentences are no better. Just a friendly suggestion 'sentance' doesnt mean anything.
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bro this is how i type on forums..informally no need 2 type for rightr spelling. i got a in gp obcviously, because my english is good.

just lost a bit of grammer bcuz i dont study anymore!!!
 
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DSM1 said:
theres no way you even got a B in GP. you dont even know how to spell grammar, and the following sentences are no better. Just a friendly suggestion 'sentance' doesnt mean anything.
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true...but he says he got an A

btw, if you Mr. got an A, lol my grandmother would've got distinction :D and just for the record, I got 95% and you can ask wajhi for confirmation
 
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true...but he says he got an A

btw, if you Mr. got an A, lol my grandmother would've got distinction :D and just for the record, I got 95% and you can ask wajhi for confirmation
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hey hey.... leave the guy alone... he doesn't have to prove you anything. mind your own business. if you are not going to help then leave. :mad:
 
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