[18.07.09] Gates to the future!

Muaaz

Wild Hunt
Jan 26, 2007
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Dutchy of Touissant
I really liked the art , but it seems a little bit overdone . And about the dialogues , you should make it more distinguished next time . Nice try though .
 

talalthegreat

You'll never walk alone
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That was lame Shyber for a guy like you..coz it had nothing to do with what I was saying. I was requesting him to make em more prominent, not 'edge-free'. But nice try :p (head back to my article...you need to read it properly)
Agree with you alot there. I couldnt distinguish it myself.
 

Black Basara

Power Is Everything!
Jul 8, 2008
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My Own Little World.
Nice..but the characters needs more polish, first i thought its just a rough concept. You should have worked on Photoshop and the dialouges seems out of place too much slang doesn't give lols, i'm not impressed with comic balloons. Anyway nice effort :)
 

abid078611

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shyber koi achey cheez banao

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farigh comics hein
 

r3aper

W'Sup, G?
Jul 23, 2007
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Karachi
Thanks for the appreciation guys! Means alot to us!

And a special shoutout to Amar for taking it to the next level, with comics coming out every week inshallah hopefully we'll improve fast!
 

Raptorian

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I'm not going to discourage here. I can say that this is a very very good first effort. Cookie's artwork is perfect. The story was well, lame but you guys are catching the drift. Keep going and give us a comic once a week atleast.
 

Lars

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Oct 6, 2008
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lol !! targeting X360 owners..........Great work ! I likeyyy
 

Amar aka Cookie

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Mar 19, 2009
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Thank You!

Thanks guys for all your support and admiration! ...

I will continue to draw comics for PG despite all the flame I've been getting.

My art may need major work, but I will not waver from drawing the comics the way I want to.

I hope I don't trample on anyone's feelings. Just to make clear that I am determined to do things my way ... I have a little present for you all.

Don't take it personally =3



Love, Amar Ali
(Amar aka Cookie)
 
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    SolitarySoldier said:
    Phil keeps talking about breaking barriers to gaming, making it accessible on all platforms yada yada, while killing competition and creativity at the same time. the fact that i actually believed him for a second lol
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    if we are moving towards more and more popular trash across platforms that make billions for companies, I'm happy with all the barriers and exclusivity because at least that brings some pressure to create good stuff.
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    Phil keeps talking about breaking barriers to gaming, making it accessible on all platforms yada yada, while killing competition and creativity at the same time. the fact that i actually believed him for a second lol
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    "These changes are not a reflection of the creativity and skill of the talented individuals at these teams or the risks they took to try new things" ... seems to me that's exactly what it is
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    Microsoft deserves all the hate they can get. Seriously i can't explain how much i want to curse them out.
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    They could've sold the studios instead of closing them, but the nazi bastards just didn't want competition down the road.
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    Sad indeed
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  • faraany3k faraany3k:
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    MS one upping Sony in catching the biggest L in gaming
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    NaNoW NaNoW: by closing down good studios