My first effort on making a Documentary

[shujaswati]

Aoa Pger's, I have done very hard work on making the documentary on my uni, Islamia College University, Peshawar. Its my very first official documentary, so be gentle when criticizing

I am not spamming or posting for business concerns, just want your opinion and feedback. A share of this video from your side will be highly appreciated. if you think its share-worthy, as I want this video to be spread more and more.

https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?v=10151710473318162




[video=facebook;10151710473318162]https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?v=10151710473318162[/video]

 

[Journeys End]

this should be in chitchat for maximum exposer!
[MENTION=39471]Blastwave[/MENTION]

 

[shujaswati]

this should be in chitchat for maximum exposer!
@Blastwave

My bad, MOD plz change the category.

 

[shujaswati]

Guys need some feedback, I knw its kinda late for asking the feedback but I love support and criticism, do remember its my first try.
[MENTION=24377]V3XED[/MENTION] [MENTION=4563]opethian[/MENTION] [MENTION=20048]yousaf465[/MENTION] [MENTION=1049]w00t[/MENTION] [MENTION=23256]Photographer[/MENTION] [MENTION=2407]fajoo24[/MENTION] [MENTION=13101]Hassan[/MENTION] [MENTION=38739]GhaniKhan[/MENTION] [MENTION=40825]RAJNI[/MENTION] [MENTION=56421]assassin2646[/MENTION] [MENTION=229]Khawaja[/MENTION] [MENTION=10537]DeNitro[/MENTION] [MENTION=9]Stuge[/MENTION] [MENTION=5946]hotgamerft[/MENTION] [MENTION=2126]Jshak[/MENTION] [MENTION=1054]Shyber[/MENTION]

 

[DeNitro]

Good job bro. I like how you have kept the interview edits to the minimum

 

[armada]

good effort i liked you done something total different keep making and next time chose some new age topic for your documentary (these education thing is kinda boring and old stuff)

camera work is great although need some color corrections in post production

and sound quality is little rough instead of inbuilt or cheap mic get rode video mic it improves audio and keep the tone same

and while filming in public tell them not to look into the camera , its kinda weird when people give devilish look to camera

 

[Photographer]

Great Documentary. Great effort

i used to live within walking distance from it and i would take a picture of it every time i walked by it

 

[hotgamerft]

Nice job mate
I remember you posting in a thread about making a documentary on Islamia College. I used to remember each time i passed the hoarding near islamia college where it says 100 years of excellence. I was kinda looking forward to it

 

[shujaswati]

[MENTION=10537]DeNitro[/MENTION], I took a total of 70 interviews. Have to select the best of them, also had to cut most of the interviews to the minimum for this documentary.
[MENTION=41864]armada[/MENTION], Its not on the education, its on the university. The time I used to study there, I always wished to make a documentary on it. Once I got the gear after few years, I fulfill my desire. The sound was recorded using a cheap microphone, as I was tight on the budget. Am planning to do time-lapse on Peshawar, but doing all-alone is a pain inthe a$$. Need around 4 people so I can distribute the work load.

and thanx [MENTION=23256]Photographer[/MENTION] and [MENTION=5946]hotgamerft[/MENTION] for the complements

 

[saqibdb]

Ohh man....thats cool.......I was dying to visit the Islamia college last time I visited Peshawar but due some issues it was not meant to be...... Very nice effort keep it up

 

[mrgoofs]

OHHHHHHHH AWESOME DAMN FINE JOB Jus improve the Audio Quality It's My College now :')

 

[mrgoofs]

OHHHHHHHH AWESOME DAMN FINE JOB Jus improve the Audio Quality It's My College now :')

 

[shujaswati]

[MENTION=9276]saqibdb[/MENTION], yup I learned from my mistakes now [MENTION=65736]MrGood[/MENTION]s, really? Do tell me when the celebration starts.

 

[Jshak]

Keep up the good work. May ALLAH bless u

 

[JJDoctor]

I am impressed... very much looks like professional work...

 

[Photographer]

[MENTION=10537]DeNitro[/MENTION], I took a total of 70 interviews. Have to select the best of them, also had to cut most of the interviews to the minimum for this documentary.
[MENTION=41864]armada[/MENTION], Its not on the education, its on the university. The time I used to study there, I always wished to make a documentary on it. Once I got the gear after few years, I fulfill my desire. The sound was recorded using a cheap microphone, as I was tight on the budget. Am planning to do time-lapse on Peshawar, but doing all-alone is a pain inthe a$$. Need around 4 people so I can distribute the work load.



and thanx [MENTION=23256]Photographer[/MENTION] and [MENTION=5946]hotgamerft[/MENTION] for the complements

A little constructive criticism mate. You should have done the interviews in pushto and Urdu and then added subtitles.

Nor dair ala alaka. Dase pa walled city mane hum jor ka. If I'm not wrong the asia gate and part of the wall still exists near kohat road area

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[Spartan 117]

Great first effort.
Never knew much about this collage, and I have to say, its awesome.

 

[shujaswati]

[MENTION=23256]Photographer[/MENTION], sure bro, I wanted to interview in local languages. But wanted to show the world how educated and creative people and that inthe most "terrorist-feard" region of the world.
And need some people to Doc that, I myself planned to make something on it before it gets demolished.

 

[yousaf465]

Great effort, but Angerazi was Pakistani style you know what I mean.

 

[JJDoctor]

Great effort, but Angerazi was Pakistani style you know what I mean.

Kisi angrez ko Urdu boltay dekho phir bolna great effort but Urdu was angrezi style...

it isn't our mother language so we are not bound to speak like angrez