Made An Intro Please Give Feedback

[mohammadasim101]

Hello guys,
I am posting after quite some time got busy with job but recently started my YouTube channel and
made this intro for Pakistan Defense Forum please see and give feedback thank you so much.

 

[wAnxTa]

Not really a fan of the jets and they sound way too loud. If you could make them a bit more subtle, that oughta fix it.

 

[mohammadasim101]

Other then sound adjustment any other tweak i made it as fan type for that forum. any advice what content might be good for youtube thanks in advance