Great start indeed its a huge commitment to do vlogging Best of luck as you have asked for feedback
well casey neistat should be your inspiration how he creates the Vlog so follow his footstep and find your own style
few things i noticed where you can improve as i am also a fan of casey so learned and observed few things from him
* Try to insert Timelapses in middle to make it less boring
* If you are walking towards something don't just show your feets show the environment viewer wants to feel like he is there no offence no body wanna see feet
plus if you are meeting someone and showing up a person in your vlog introduce him (short intro) first that what casey does as well so you can connect it to him even you had introduced few vlogs back
* I would prefer having no write ups in the Vlog i have seen in your vlog you write lots of text in between like i saw in one of your VLOG mentioning "yeh jagah hi manhoos ha" and the text appears i once got mugged there
rather than typing text there it is better to tell the story what had happened there ppl will be interested in that than just reading i once got mugged there
i remember one of caseys vlog where he nearly escaped a accident and later he explained what happened and couple of similar incident he had faced he had explained i.e bike lanes
* Try to switch backdrops i see your vlogs major chunk gets over at one backdrop i.e whole thing was shooted in car or half of it / or half of shooted in a room
even if you are shooting in a room try to switch camera angles or zoomin out in the middle or going handheld
sorry if it sound critical i just gave my honest feedback with improvements option what i feel in my capacity Best of luck take a look at other vlog there are few pakistanis as well into it so take inspiration you will grow by time