Amatuer Paki youtube show: "i think i'm a spy"

[Photographer]

just want PG's opinion on this show. Like what do u think of the idea of the show? what do you think of the acting? what do u think of the Script? etc etc


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PS: this is not mine. i just found them on youtube and think they deserve some support

 

[TheBrokenMan]

=/ .... uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh so you gonna sap some sentry and dispensers?

 

[killerdons]

I liked it, you guys will get much better with time. Script was okay, acting was okay too. Why don't you guys speak in your national language and add English subtitles. Anyhow waiting for the next episode, wondering who this Kane will turn out to be

 

[Sire Ahsan]

Too heavily scripted ... and too cliched.

 

[TheBrokenMan]

a better camera you guys could use one =/

 

[killerdons]

Its a home production not a Hollywood blockbuster.

 

[ijlalnoor]

Hey a great effort! Keep it up!

 

[devildante99]

Try speaking in urdu mate, that would look more natural. Otherwise nice effort, good job

 

[Majawar]

Hahaha. Nice one...Sound could be made more clear but still a nice effort.... I'll like to see what happens next.

 

[Stuge]

why are they speaking to themselves ? whatever they are saying its not clear .

line of the day "did you touch my cellphone " lol.other guy just came in hha

 

[eViLrAcEr]

too many problems, the script's all wrong, the accents are all wrong, the acting isn't convincing, the story's all wrong, the logic's all wrong, the subtitles' all wrong.

What you said was "Suzanne" not "Susan". There's a world of difference b/w Susan and Sid. The names...are all wrong.

Not Every Word Needs To Be Capitalized In A Sentence. @subtitles.

Burn it to the ground -...Nickelback ..? Seriously?!

Aur agaye aukaat per @ fart sound

If you want a following, make it professional...or at least make it feel like you're trying.